A Large Black Dog
Shimmering darkness curled like a lovers hand about hidden features, swirling onyx pearls rising with a turn of his head to the newly hung canopy of blackness and the halos of ageless burning stars. A...
View ArticleRe: A Large Black Dog
Hey you.Couple of tiny typos, but that's it for nit.Effective as hell. Ever read Camus' The Plague? Its powerful sense of foreboding made it one of the greatest books of its time. I believe this short...
View ArticleRe: A Large Black Dog
Great write, bee. Congrats on Writing Award of the Weekbe back for comments (yea, I say that a lot - I will make time...promise.)
View ArticleRe: A Large Black Dog
Thanks Smikes, I didn't know that the main character had an evil feel to him. Thanks for the award, and I know you'll get around to commenting, Ry, I'll wait.Bee
View ArticleRe: A Large Black Dog
guess he didn't after all, T. Sorry. Went back and read between the lines 'stead of focusing on key 'dark' words (there are a lot of them, but then the tone of the entire piece is rather, necessarily,...
View ArticleRe: A Large Black Dog
You paint the picture quite well, and I have to repeat, I believe this to be your sleeper talent. The images you choose to create are solid, they draw you in, and you do what you want with the reader....
View Article
